Maybe it's the pills or the drugs or the booze

[Jesus.]

Maybe it's the fact that I want me to lose
Think about a girl that knocked me off of my feet
Trade her for a hooker that said I was sweet
Another bender, repeat offender
Sex and drugs are legal tender

[Jesus.]

AND I WAS SCARED TO DIE NOW IM SCARED TO LIVE!

[Southside Arturo]

you a flamin ass ho
i got the flamin hot cheeto
stick it in your mouth then pop it like mosquito
bites, you want something tasty?
dont need the alcohol to start acting hasty
the pills and the booze just put you to sleep
never slam a hooker more than 10 inches deep
its a waste of time waste of money
paying for ass and honeys
roll up to they face and start talking like dummies
pretend i dont know em
but i'm wise to their game
two more of these lines and ill put your flow to shame
its the s.s.a. in case you didnt know
dont even step if you aint got the dough
you trying to hard just to chase the paper
the cheddar in your fantasies is turning to vapor
after your dreams you'll be wide awake
you'll never post a rhyme that sounded that fake

[Jesus.]

southsidearturo said:

you a flamin ass ho
i got the flamin hot cheeto
stick it in your mouth then pop it like mosquito
bites, you want something tasty?
dont need the alcohol to start acting hasty
the pills and the booze just put you to sleep
never slam a hooker more than 10 inches deep
its a waste of time waste of money
paying for ass and honeys
roll up to they face and start talking like dummies
pretend i dont know em
but i'm wise to their game
two more of these lines and ill put your flow to shame
its the s.s.a. in case you didnt know
dont even step if you aint got the dough
you trying to hard just to chase the paper
the cheddar in your fantasies is turning to vapor
after your dreams you'll be wide awake
you'll never post a rhyme that sounded that fake

finally someone replies the only part i didnt like was this one

i got the flamin hot cheeto

[Southside Arturo]

Don’t like the cheetos that’s why your fingers smell like pussy
Masturbation must make you feel really good see
My lyrics impenetrable like a robotic virgin
Chastity belt gotta get removed by a surgeon
Not gonna get laid to waste by another panty waist
Put that turkey to baste, give it a better taste
Or flavor. Something different to savor
Like sweat from your armpits after a hard day of labor
Something old something new for yall
Call me a born again loser
Nothing good about being a boozer or a user?
Some people prefer living life like a grouch
Bringing that attitude all the way to my couch
Before I kick you out the living room I promise you this:
You gotta put pen to PAPER before you criticize the wiz
Homie

[Jorge]

fucking awesome

[Jesus.]

miasma said:

fucking awesome

get out of my thread!


second rhyme is cooler

[Southside Arturo]

damn right it was cooler, cause i'm on a fucking roll
the fires already hot, you dont have to add coal
now its about time you put those fingers to the test
you had all night to practice, let me see you try your best
its the internet rap game hide your face behind the screen
you already know the king so the best you can be is queen
not like freddy mercury more like charlie sheen
hit up more hollywood hoes than the legend steve mcqueen
fucking machine you all already know it
got more limericks than a broke ass poet
from a dead society
like laredo hardcore
styles so quick it so hard to ignore
steady flow steady rhyme its what im famous for
robbin from the rich but still good at being poor
baby

[Jesus.]

southsidearturo said:

damn right it was cooler, cause i'm on a fucking roll
the fires already hot, you dont have to add coal
now its about time you put those fingers to the test
you had all night to practice, let me see you try your best
its the internet rap game hide your face behind the screen
you already know the king so the best you can be is queen
not like freddy mercury more like charlie sheen
hit up more hollywood hoes than the legend steve mcqueen
fucking machine you all already know it
got more limericks than a broke ass poet
from a dead society
like laredo hardcore
styles so quick it so hard to ignore
steady flow steady rhyme its what im famous for
robbin from the rich but still good at being poor
baby

wow
this ones better


no contest
!!!!